I needed my thriller to move—fast, sharp, and relentless. But my draft? It stalled. The first few chapters were too heavy on setup. I had long stretches between the action where nothing really happened. The tension that was supposed to carry the story forward kept deflating before it ever got a chance to build. I knew the core idea was strong, but the pacing just didn’t deliver. That’s when I turned to British Proofreading’s book editing service, and it changed everything. The editor went straight for what wasn’t working and helped me shape the manuscript into something tighter, leaner, and far more engaging. They trimmed out scenes that were dragging the pace, cut back on unnecessary exposition, and helped me reorganize the structure so the story opened with impact and kept the momentum all the way through. My dialogue? Sharper. My plot twists? Cleaner. The tension? Finally gripping. They helped me refine every chapter so that something important—whether a reveal, a decision, or a threat—was always pulling the reader forward. But what really impressed me was how they helped me maintain character depth even in high-speed scenes. They didn’t just suggest cuts—they showed me how to keep the emotional stakes in focus, how to build character arcs through the action, and how to raise the stakes without losing clarity. And the twists? They helped make sure each one landed exactly as it should—surprising, earned, and satisfying. Now, the story races from page one and doesn’t stop until the final scene. Early readers have told me they read it in a single sitting. That’s the kind of reaction I was hoping for. If you’re writing a thriller and want your book to hit hard and keep readers hooked, British Proofreading’s book editing service is the team you want behind you. They don’t just edit. They elevate. They know exactly how to bring the fire.