My travelogue started as a collection of journal entries from years of journeys abroad. I wanted readers to experience the places I had seen and the cultures I had encountered, but the manuscript felt scattered. Some sections read more like a guidebook, while others drifted into long, unfocused reflection. British Proofreading transformed it. Their book editing service helped me find a clear structure that allowed the narrative to flow like a journey. They worked on pacing, trimmed repetition, and refined the tone so that it felt vivid and personal without overwhelming readers with detail. The editor also suggested subtle ways to bring out sensory description, which made the landscapes, sounds, and people come alive on the page. Now my travelogue reads as a cohesive story of discovery rather than a pile of notes. It captures both the movement and the meaning of travel. Readers will not just learn about the places I visited. They will feel like they are walking beside me.