Cyberpunk fiction is all about atmosphere. My book had neon skylines, fractured systems, and a gritty hero fighting against the machine. But the first draft was overcomplicated. The pacing dragged under too much description, and the dialogue didn’t always match the sharpness of the setting. British Proofreading’s book editing service gave my manuscript the edge it needed. My editor helped streamline the worldbuilding so the story remained immersive without drowning the reader in detail. They polished dialogue so it snapped with urgency, and they guided me in restructuring scenes to build momentum. The tone was refined to feel darker, more consistent, and more in line with the genre. The final manuscript feels fast, sharp, and atmospheric. The world still has all the grit and detail I wanted, but now it moves with pace and energy. If you are writing in this genre, this editing team knows how to capture both the technology and the humanity that cyberpunk relies on.