I thought this presentation was put together poorly and there was a few mistakes: ie, when it said cooled on the screen the woman's voice said cooked and it was confusing. Also, i thought it went on for too long and it got boring and i lost concentration towards the end. i think you should be able to read it in your own time and choose whether you have the voice in the background or not, if you dont have the voice you should be able to skip to the next page when ever you are done with the last page because otherwise you are staring at a screen for too long for no reason. You should make it more fun, colourful and interesting so that the person learning is having fun and can engage so they learn more. The only parts I remembered were the bits i laughed at with my friend. goodbye thankyou.