Hi Industrial Scripts / Screenplay Editors - many thanks for your clear-eyed, connected and detailed notes regarding my screenplay. The coverage was sincere, incisive and insightful. Already many of the readers' observations I have implemented, and because of this the structure and passion of character has improved no end. It was very rewarding to also be told that the screenplay contains everything it needs to be a thrilling adventure concerning the plot / characters / unique of nature of the story. I'm very grateful for the keen observations and can't thank Industrial Scripts enough. Cheers !!