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Industrial Scripts - Screenplay Editors 5 star review on 18th March 2024

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Anonymous // 01/01/2019

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“Up to snuff... spot on... I read all the things others said. I found my script improved substancially by the knee jerk notes my guy called them which are reactions while reading. The most incitful I have ever gotten. They turned me on to the shortest point between the last version of my script and what I am now calling my new and improved. I have a dozen scripts I am going to run through this service as the input from them clicked in me way more than the tired cut and paste notes from other services. Thanks and looking forward to a long fruitful relatioship.”

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Posted 1 year ago

“I greatly enjoyed the feedback I was given from Industrial Scripts. I found their review refreshing and a great help to my script. It's good to get a totally unbiased opinion to work with. Thank you Industrial Scripts”

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Posted 5 days ago

“The report I received from Industrial Scripts was invaluable. While I have a lot of writing experience, I'm new to screenwriting, with no formal training. The pointers I received on structure and character were excellent, not only directly benefiting my revision but also pointing me toward other learning resources.”

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Posted 1 week ago

“There are notes, and then there are notes. Industrial Scripts provides excellent, actionable coverage that serious writers should consider. There is a ton of coverage available. Why Industrial Scripts? It's all in the details. They reference page numbers, dialogue, specific action moments, and suggestions on improving the scene. The notes are tough but fair. As a result, my script has been taken to the next level. After all, isn't that what notes are all about? Andrea Park - Max and Sam Save The Galaxy!!”

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Posted 3 weeks ago

“I submitted one 100 page script, HARMONY,. I was billed $195 twice. I was mis-billed another $300 and have not been able to reach anyone about refunding. My script is 100 pages not 200 pages. Please advise when to expect the $300 over-charged refund, as will as the second $195 charge. Cheers Max Segal 917-929-1327”

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Posted 3 weeks ago

“I dont know what skill level or experience or education that reader had but [1] they knew nothing of greek mythology [2] knew nothing of philosophy and well known philosophers and thinkers [3] did not understand or see that script has a picturesque style with elements of magical realism - some similarity in structure with Forrest Gump [4] wrote in a pleasant style which however needed a lot of my work to get to their real meaning [5] completely confused what two characters did - and so wrote that one was angry - which was completely wrong [6] despite three sub-titles dlearly stating the two main time periods of the story the reader seemed confused about time periods. I wonder if a more knowledgeble and competent reader would have given the script a higher score. I will soon find out. Overall a waste of my money and I doubt that I will risk using your services again”

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Posted 2 months ago

“This is interesting, clearly the reviewer was unimpressed and that is the reviewer's perogative. However, this is the third review, one in Australia and the second in the US. Both earlier reviews were impressed by the construct, the characters, the tone and dialogue. Both thought the script had strong potential. Obviously, both made suggestions, which were implemented and the script improved. We sat on it for a year, tinkered with it and thought, let's give it a final polish. If the reviewer was trying to impress you, good for him. Me, I was underwhelmed, particularly given the stark contrast with the earlier reviews.”

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Posted 4 months ago

“I got the best coverage I ever received from Industrial Scripts. Not only was it constructive, with actionable notes but I really felt a connection with the reader. They were very personable in the best possible way. I had clear direction for a rewrite and everything just gelled. Can't recommend I.S. enough. Only one little drawback. It's impossible to contact them! I have create tickets and they don't respond. I've tried to email but I don't think there is one. Other than that, everything's stellar!”

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Posted 6 months ago

“Fantastic feedback. The reader knew his/her stuff and made excellent, insightful observations and suggestions. I really needed and appreciated this high-level evaluation of my screenplay.”

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Posted 6 months ago

“Greatest notes I've ever had. So insightful and helpful.”

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Posted 7 months ago

“My review might be a bit bias because I recieved such a positive reader's report! But either way, the notes covered everything from plot, character, and dialogue to pacing, tone, and formatting. All notes were insightful, specific, and above all helpful - the suggestions work! The only thing I had hoped was a synopsis (this used to be provided but it's been a while since I availed of Industrial Scripts' expert service). The report was so strong I am confident I can now submit the script for a forensic examination. Yours, Steven Benedict”

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Posted 7 months ago

“As expected, the review from IS was excellent. The reviewer hit the nail on the head by pointing at things like character development of the protagonist and his arc. Thank you.”

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Posted 10 months ago

“An honest review and insightful feedback. Editor flagged a few important areas that I had missed, and overall gave a very thoughtful understanding of the themes, character arcs, and motifs that were woven in. They had to have read it two or more times to provide this level of understanding. I will definitely be back with my next script.”

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Posted 11 months ago

“It is Okay to tell you truthfully. I agree with the overall analysis.”

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Posted 1 year ago

“The 'honest' feedback was useless considering the reader HHM didn't read all the pages + he expected it to conform to his 'self-made' formulas of how a script must be written which is absurd. It was classic case of readers expecting the script's story beats to literally unfold exactly 100% to their terms/ rules/ page-touchstones. They'll deny resorting to that of cos and instead likely claim that it's a sure fire way to win a contest - if this method is so magical then they wouldn't even still be readers and they'd literally be inside the hollywood walls, doing REAL films. But to get down to it, I'm dissatisfied with the reader for clearly not understanding the material coz he clearly cheated by skipping pages and doesn't know the genre at all well and resorts to a very obvious overly rigid formulas on how to get through a script, resulting in useless notes expecting u to write to how he prefers it lime he's the boss. I've read feedback from numerous readers fr years and I'm at a point where it's clear this guy uses a lot of formulas. And one clearly being that he ignorantly assumes that the road to a great script is that everything must be connected to the opening and nothing, absolutely nothing, can ever be introduced outside of the opening coz he thinks if it's not related to it, it fails instantly... even though some elements introduced later ARE in fact connected but in ways he clearly can't figure out. And that's his real problem - so overly reliant of his rules/ formulas that he can't see outside of his own peripheral vision. I love how his opening sentence has the word 'inventive script', which he then later contradicts. Same with the ending - he basically called it 'good' only to then say it wasn't, as you read on. If you don't mean it, don't write it! So many crappy 'readers' resort to this hypocrisy. You also have the usual thing of him not proofreading his own feedback and also skipping my script pages coz he's just too lazy halfway. As a result, it's kinda hilarious that the reader blames the writer for things not making sense when clearly the fault is his for deliberately skipping/ cheating. I bet he even uses lots of "CTRL + F" too - the very definition of lazy idiots who frankly deserve the boot! If I had to guess, I'd say this individual must have started reading when he was in some numbed stressed-out, closed-box state without allowing his mind to be open or even 'think', coz apparently he expected all details to be spoon-fed every single step of the way without giving things a first thought (no, not second, but first!). When I said I spent 2 years working on it, he assumed it meant only draft 1. The notion that I might have rewritten it countless times with lots of feedback from others over that period never once occurred to him, or even perhaps that he might have been receiving draft number 15? He even wastes a whole page bragging that he can write 10 pages a day in finish a script in 15 days. Anyone with a brain knows no solid script can be written that way! What also lost me is when he mis-wrote my number of pages. How many scripts has this guy read? Everyone knows when you look at a pdf page count, it means you must minus 1 page from it. Is this guy a pro or apparently he doesn't care about what he writes? Clearly not and this was just a paycheck for him to knock off and go home fast. I asked for honest feedback, not malice and condescension. Going back to him lacking imagination, I can clearly tell the horror genre isn't this reader's cup of tea AT ALL & clearly only chose to watch certain horror titles JUST coz he has to stay current, not coz he loves it. It's apparent when his notes give no reference or examples to other horror films as guidance - merely mentioning their titles tells us nothing. He obviously has no inkling that horror requires some degree of imagination & bcoz I chose not to spell things out/ giving all the answers right away, or I chose to have things be at first mysterious & to deliberately let the reader piece things together, he instantly assumed it means the writer doesn't know what the pages are talking about. Luckily for me, some readers got it, but he clearly/ stupidly did not. Again, he expected things to be spoon-fed right away, full answers rightaway, claiming it's for clarity... bcoz if something isn't written exactly how he prefers, he can't think. I wasn't even writing abstract stuff. What ever happened to letting readers piece things together bcoz you are respecting their intelligence? The answers were there and he just sped through missing them coz apparently things can only be written one way for him. What I've come to learn over the years is when a reader doesn't get your story, they won't get ANYTHING at all and their mind starts to not pay attention as they go, hence, they'll criticize your script for plot holes when in fact it's coz they didn't read properly... and the fact they will skip pages & blame u when something doesn't make sense. In turn, everything to them will feel like a disaster, made even more apparent in their rubbish notes/ suggestions... and boy were they just that! I can appreciate the honesty which is what i asked for but it's all useless if the script isn't something he can grasp at all coz it's not his thing at all. The biggest laugh is he at the end rated me as a 'low consider' which is above 'pass' - I'm gonna take that as a typo on his end coz what he wrote 100% doesn't connect to said verdict AT ALL... unless the script was maybe being read by 2 (or 3?) different people which could explain some erratic/ abnormal reactions. If that's what happened, I'd fire them! Overall, just my luck this reader HHM is one of those so overly inundated with self-righteous/ self-made formulas/ rules that if any script deviates from this 'perfect' bible of his, you're screwed automatically! Something for em' to think about, hopefully. Well, so much for $195.”

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Posted 1 year ago

“thorough, kind, very important that it's written kindly, makes the whole note reading and taking process a lot more pleasant and constructive. The consultant highlighted a lot of lose ends we didn't see , and also made some good suggestions. Some others we didn't agree with, as we are a team of 3 writers. I was also pleasantly surprised by the scoring. Not sure if it's 100% objective, afterall, we are paying for this service. still, it was clear the consultant read the script thoroughly, although I think he missed one scene, he read it thoroughly and gave candid review and suggestions. I am happy to have approached IS for a review. thank you.”

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Posted 1 year ago

“I am extremely impressed with, and grateful for, Industrial Scripts and the person who reviewed my script. They went above and beyond what I expected. The feedback was thoughtful and useful. Five stars and “very good” does not do enough justice. I highly recommend this service.”

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Posted 1 year ago

“I received great actionable feedback from my analyst. The analyst was very detailed in the coverage and even suggested an alternate treatment of certain areas of the story. The coverage was very helpful.”

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Posted 1 year ago

“This was the first time in the last few years I've used Industrial Scripts, having fallen away from writing for a while. The script I submitted was a comedy - something that can be extremely subjective. The script was delivered on time, as always, and contained a lot of helpul advice. The notes were detailed and very impressive. The reader certainly understood what I was trying to do and was very insightful, especially concerning one character who they said, wasn't sympathetic enough and the reason for her being the way she is, wasn't explained. After reading through this and some other notes I read through the script again and I couldn't fault this reader. They helped me see the things I hadn't noticed. I will use this information to improve the script and improve the grading. I love this script and will do my best to see it on the silver screen! The notes I received show how important it is to have someone like Industrial Scripts on your side. If you don't want an honest review, shop elsewhere. To quote Bill and Ted, "Excellent!"”

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Posted 1 year ago

“It was terrific! Very in-depth and clear - I needed this kind of help before I started to send out my screenplay. Thank you!”

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Posted 1 year ago

“Great job. My reader pointed out areas that required work, gave workable solutions, and was quite encouraging. This was a practical experience rather than abstract.”

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Posted 1 year ago

Industrial Scripts - Screenplay Editors is rated 4.6 based on 722 reviews