Industrial Scripts stole my money. The reviewer used computer aids for displaying *.PDF screenplay files in a way that makes them appear incomprehensible. Then, systematically, every aspect of the screenplay is attacked; the point, I suppose, is to use a shot-gun approach to criticism so that whatever is wrong will be identified, along with everything else. Later, the 'everything-else' can be explained away as being a casualty of the 'one-thing' that confused the reader so much, he saw everything as being problematic. I won't be using any of your services ever again.