The Development Notes feedback was thorough, insightful and extremely helpful - it highlighted flaws and gave useful suggestions for how those could be rectified, while balancing the review with commendations for the parts of the script handled well. Focusing on both the pluses and minuses serves as a useful pointer for what works and what doesn't, which will be invaluable not only in improving this script but in helping me develop as a writer with future projects. The reader was obviously knowledgeable, inspiring trust and confidence in their opinions. Overall money well spent!