Outstanding, insightful review! You can tell the editor read (and re-read) everything, to provide a comprehensive look at the script and the concept. I submitted a pilot and series bible, it was beyond obvious that both were poured over by someone who seems to love their job. The final work product was, literally, masterfully written - I'd go so far to say that the coverage was better written than my script! After years of coverage and tweaking, the editor found a way to strengthen not only the pilot, but the series in full. This is undoubtedly the place to go when you're ready to finalize your project!