I am very pleased with the detailed report I received back on my script, Mother of Ghosts. Much of the analysis reflected my own thoughts and to have those pinpointed and confirmed by an industry expert has proved very useful. However, not only were the weaknesses flagged up, but helpful suggetions made on how to firm up these areas. I am confident that by following the recommendations, I will end up with a much better, viable script. It's important to say that there were many positives mentioned too, which is very heartening - sometimes it's all too easy to remember only the negatives. I will use the services of Industrial Scripts again and feel confident in recommending them to others.