Dear Industrial Scripts, Thank you very much for your report of my script. I was very pleased with the report which arrived very promptly and contained very useful feedback. The report gave useful feedback about the scripts potential in the market place, the overall concept and the characters journeys. Although I disagreed slightly with some of the comments regarding historical accuracy, the analyst offered a lot of useful criticism of the script and guidance of how to improve it further. Using Industrial Scripts has been a very positive experience that I feel will improve my script. Many thanks, Mariam Bell