There were marketing strategies I had not thought of; very insightful and implementing is straightforward. However, about half way through, the language quality declined, use of profanity was present from that point on. The wrap up dialogue shifted to separating out potential clients using imagery that first suggested it may not be the right time for individuals to invest with her. Then it took on a guilt trip focus stating that if a person isn't interested in cultivating their potential or do not want to contribute to society, then they are not the right fit. This was eye opening to the "Calibur" of professionalism the Author Incubator seeks to work with. I will not need to detail out the obvious reasons this approach finds the market it does, but I can say you will likely find better ideas and gain more online credibility should you align your authentic self with the first half of your delivery. That is someone people will invest $20,000 - $30,000 to be mentored by. And, the percentage of "quality books" published from those partnerships would increase. For the most part, the presentation succinctly progressed through a thought process foundational to Lauria's business platform, unfortunately, both the business and caliber of the author "became pushy" and lost credibility. I do think you are definitely on to a great idea, which has produced a degree of success, but there are some fine tune adjustments which could make this amazing, a stand alone with out all the exuberant hype.