I like the message and it does feel like you are talking right to me. I can see where it could work and it almost feels simple. However, you spend much time talking about all the money I can make with you while avoiding tell how much your program costs. I agree if your programs works like you claim it will money may not be a problem in the future but the fact is it is a problem now. I don't believe I will jumping through hoops to show you I am dedicated when you can't even be straight and upright about the cost. The way you are going about it makes me feel like you are trying to pull the wool over my eyes. All you need to say is this program costs this much and this is why. I would probably still be unable to afford it but at least I won't walk away feeling like you are trying to trick me.