Frankly, I was unable to accept the final will beacuse it did not meet my needs. The will is simple and enough for a person with straightforward wishes.
Eg, I do not wish to cancel out my other will made in another country.
Also, you have some Survival Rules that I dont understand completely. You did not ask if I wanted to have them in my will.
Your term “children” in clause 7 refers to children and/or step-children? I would like to exclude step-children.
I had one other “need” which I forgot to write and that is to allow my trustees to use the money in my estate to pay for my grandchildren’s needs but I would have to contact you make the additional request.
In the end, I would say, you have a good enough will for a person with straightforward wishes and not one like me with a blended family and a resident of two countries.